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Posted by admin | Posted in Parts And Stuff | Posted on 30-09-2013

Ball Frame Tongue


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Is this an okay poem?

i get out of the shower
and listen to them scream
i blast my music
so i dont hear a thing
once he leaves
all gets quiet
i hear sobs
i hear heaves
like a seamstress i weave her back together
from the tatters he had pulled her apart
her warm tears
roll down my bare back
the lump is growing in my throat
i bite my tongue to stay strong.
stomach growls, homework beckons
i dont want to leave her
curled up this ball
even for a couple of seconds
i want her to be the structure
to hold up all this weight
but now its me.
i better go back
to make sure she's okay
and hold her when she isn't
because
i am the structure
i am the frame.
i keep her together.

very nice. the first 10 lines are the best,in my opinion, though for line 4 i recommend "so not to hear a thing". the rest is okay indeed, but the beginning of your poem, i do believe, is really great.

thank you very much for the read.

Originally posted 2010-05-24 01:46:52.

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